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Brooke Bandel's avatar

oh MY GOD. have you thought about making music??

Because oh my god that’s so powerful and rythemic

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neal riggers's avatar

lol not really but people have been telling me i should! and thank you for reading ! 🙏🏾

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Rich's avatar

I second this

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neal riggers's avatar

the only issue is that i hate my voice

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Rich's avatar

Same but bro think about it like this I’m British right and some of the rhyme schemes or flows I write to really only fit in an American accent so it’s awkward af 😭

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neal riggers's avatar

i might just get someone else to read it 😂

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Amanda Izzo's avatar

The first paragraph.

Holy. Fucking. Shit.

I mean this in the most sincere way possible; you are a poetic powerhouse.

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neal riggers's avatar

thank you 😭🤞🏾

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Fred Szkoda's avatar

Poetry is meant to be spoken, It’s a crime that you don’t have you haven’t dropped an audio of you reading it!

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The unseen Journal's avatar

Felt like I was reading a deep rap song, I love this piece! Thank you for sharing it with us!

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neal riggers's avatar

thank you so much for reading !!!

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