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LT.'s avatar

neal and rich, pane nostro was the love alive and romefellistood is what stood after. built to break from within, still i stood in the flame is the kind of closing that holds it. 🤎

neal riggers's avatar

i appreciate you so much for really following this series !!

Christy's avatar

Love the image and the I crossed those lines for you

neal riggers's avatar

thank you so much for taking time to read!

HP NOT LOVECRAFT's avatar

“You stopped chasing her

And started chasing yourself.” WHAT OMLLLL IM STILL ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT 💺 SO GOOD!!

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HPeezy appreciate you always!!

LaTonia Pearl Harris's avatar

This poem has a lot of momentum! It feels epic and the audio adds to that. Great job Rich and Neal 🙌🏽

neal riggers's avatar

thank you so much for reading!!

Brianna Perry's avatar

Y’all are on a generational run. Very easily the best thing I’ve read all week. This is Hip-hop, poetry and Blues. 🔥

neal riggers's avatar

thank you so much! tryna keep up the momentum!! appreciate your support always!!

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thank you so much for your support!!

Tom Newcomer's avatar

“…when rome lost its breath i was breathin through fire…”🔥

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such a bar! thank you so much for reading man!

Diario de un Übermensch's avatar

would you call it defeat

or a miracle, minimal sun and it still found a way just to be?

neal riggers's avatar

always gotta find a way to be!

Ray Sweatman's avatar

Fantastic !

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Ray! thank you my friend!!